Thursday, February 19, 2015


THE SHELL
by Michael Lizarraga

The following excerpt is from 'The Seashell,' a story by Michael Lizarraga published by Schlock! Publications in an anthology titled 'Timeless Worlds.' An excerpt screenplay from an upcoming film version can be found at www.MichaelLizarraga.com, under The Shell (short)

Synopses: Hold a seashell to your ear, hear the sounds of the ocean” is one of the biggest myths many of us believed while growing up. In addition to this is an even stranger tale – a captured “scream” heard within a seashell, from someone who had drowned near it while it was in the ocean. Forever echoing.

But suppose these were not mere ocean legends... 

Anna heard the noises again, from the shell's mouth, this time giggles. Children, echoey and distant, as if in a basement or cellar. 

It was the size of a football, a particular seashell known as Murex Ramosus, its rock-rough, spiny exterior blended white and brown with thin beige streaks, pinkish blotches and striations all around.   

The bewildered woman grabbed the seashell, studied its multiple pointy edges, its rows of short, long thick/thin finger-like arms jutting in different directions, one end like a spiraled drill or an Indian pagoda, swirling into a pinnacle. Anna listened as the echoey laughing of children continued. Holding the shell closer, she peered into its wide opening, its oval, lemon-shaped mouth the size of a large pomegranate, or a small bowl, ten centimeters in diameter. Resembled a clown with no eyes tilting his head, mouth wide open, laughing.

Then her head jolted back as a gush of water shot out from the seashell's mouth, splashing her face. Her eyes squinted, mouth gasped, and she was unsure whether to be startled or annoyed. Again, she heard the children's smirks from within the shell.

Then, silence.        

Her brows arched with intense curiosity, putting the shell's mouth to her right ear, its cold porcelain like interior against the side of her head. It was the sound of the ocean deep - the actual deep - far different than any seashell Anna ever held. The lapping and swishing of underwater currents, the movement and noises of marine life, similar to aquatic recordings played in Yoga classes, or therapists' waiting rooms. 
                                               
Keeping the shell pressed to her ear, she heard whispers again, sounding like a little boy and girl. The sounds shifted, from echoey and distant to girggling "underwater talking" sounds.
 

But curiosity switched to pain when Anna felt a sharp, powerful clamp on her ear. She wailed in agony and terror as she pulled the seashell away and gazed into the bathroom mirror. Attached to her ear and lower cheek was a thick, slimy six-inch leech, its dark body as fat and as big as a baby fig banana. Its anterior jaws were unyielding, hundreds of tiny sharp teeth slicing and digging further into the woman's flesh and bone the more she tugged on the blood-sucking creature, while the jaws on the leech's posterior end were equally stubborn. Extending from her ear almost to her mouth, it looked as if she held an opened flip phone to her cheek, blood now streaming down her jaw and neck.

 She brought the seashell back to her agonizing face, the screaming Anna again peering into its mouth, frantically searching the curvature of this shell's throat for any other signs of life as a confirmation that this experience was actually happening. She shrieked when thick, liquidy black/green sea sludge exploded from the shell, catching Anna's face. An overwhelming stench of waste and chemicals assailed her nostrils. The entire left side of Anna's face was now covered in slime, a pain like fire on an opened wound. She dropped the seashell, shouting and falling to her knees, steam and smoke ascending from both the sludge and her melting, drooping face. Her cheek showed bone, while flesh dangled from her jaw like shredded meat. An actual hole formed in the side of her face, revealing molars. On the other side, the hungry leech dug deeper, producing veins. Her screams raked out of her throat and bolted from her mouth in howling spates.  

Anna looked at the seashell on the floor, watched another phenomenon occur. Small, insect like sea creatures scurried from the seashell's mouth, by the hundreds, like popcorn bubbling from a popcorn machine. Assorted species - crustaceans, mites, worms, parasites - quick and fast, campaigning toward Anna. 

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For complete version of The Shell, you may purchase "Timeless Worlds," (titled The Seashell), a horror anthology from Schlock! Publications. Available on Kindle and paperback. http://www.amazon.com/Timeless-Worlds-Schlock-Anthology-Book-ebook/dp/B009EA05MK


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14 comments:

  1. I'll never put a seashell to my ear again. I felt like I was watching a movie, the way it was written was so graphic, "while flesh dangled from her jaw like shredded meat." That image stuck in my head and I can't get it out.....the horror is stuck in my head. But I can't stop reading, wanna find out how it ends...

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    1. Mr. West,

      Glad to have 'stuck the horror your head.' Come back any time, as Pennywise the Clown once said.

      Mike

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  2. Edgy. Cinematic visuals are painfully realized in every sentence. As a film director, I'd like to work with Michael on the right project.

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    1. Lance,

      Would be a true honor to work with such a seasoned film vet as you.
      For those reading this, be sure to check out Mr. Tracy's upcoming thriller, "Relentless," https://www.kickstarter.com/projects/humanrace/the-human-race-presents-relentless-a-feature-film, a compelling film about the kidnapping of one woman's daughter who is sold into human trafficking in El Salvador. Visit www.LanceTracy.net.

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  3. The Shell would easily lend itself to the big screen. The strong visuals and high tension would make for a very cinematic experience.

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    1. Buck,

      Hope to one day cinematically lend The Shell to you - a box or corn in one hand, Pepto-Bismol in the other.

      Be sure to check out this talented screenwriter's/stand-up comic's work, my friends, at https://www.youtube.com/user/BuckEstes. Quite comical.

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  4. So disturbingly vivid that you would not be able to look at an ordinary object like a shell the same way ever again. Reading Mr. Lizarraga's stories is such a treat, and I am delighted to have had his works grace the pages of Dark Gothic Resurrected Magazine.

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  5. Madam Mistress,

    A pleasure to have thwarted any "tranquility" a seashell may have caused you. And always a pleasure to be a "creature feature" of Dark Gothic Resurrected,

    Be sure to check out Mistress Rae's award winning spine tingling mag, Dark Gothic Resurrected at their web page at http://bloodtouch.webs.com/darkgothicmagazine.htm and Facebook page at Page, https://www.facebook.com/DarkGothicResurrectedMagazine?ref=hl. Simply scary!

    Mike

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  6. I have known Mike the writer for a long time, and it has been such a pleasure to watch his writing grow and transform. Clearly, his strength is creating vivid images using all of the senses. His specific detail draws the reader into his world. I love the comment stated earlier, "the horror is stuck in my head." As a writer, I know that is the best compliment. Great job, Mike!

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    1. Hey Vickie, thanks for reading!

      Coming from a long-standing "mentor," your critiques and comments still manage to find their way into my tool chest.

      Folks, be sure to catch some of Vicky's video work at https://www.youtube.com/user/vaoddino. Great stuff!

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  7. This was seriously scary stuff. The juxtaposition from child-like laughter and joy to pain and horror was brilliant. I could picture the image of Anna's face in my mind and was totally grossed out! Great imagery. Awesome work, Lizarraga!

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    1. Hi Alicia.

      Yes, I like to think the ocean, like a lot of God's creations, have "both" peaceful and not-so-peaceful sides to it, for reasons that are hard to explain. Usually seashells are exempt. Usually ; )

      If in need of a good editor/proofreader, folks, be sure to visit Alicia's Facebook page at https://www.facebook.com/pages/The-Riters-Bloc/221925784583025

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  8. I want more!!! How do I read the whole story? I went to the Emby Press website & registered, but couldn't get far. I'm willing to purchase, I'm just hoping there's simple way to do it... Or is it not available yet?

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  9. Patrick,

    Apparently, faithful reader, The Shell is still pending publication in "Deep Sea Monster Hunter," and thus unavailable at Emby Press at this moment. BUT, never fear - it has been published elsewhere! Just click on the "new" link I just installed at bottom of excerpt, and that will take you to "Timeless Worlds," a horror anthology by Schlock! Publications available on Kindle and paperback on Amazon. My utmost apologies for any inconvenience this has caused any readers.

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